Zeno Hiraken's Art Show Off

Might as well post some of my shizzle here.
If you would be so kind, please comment on the drawings. Thank you. ^^
Due the lack of having a working scanner, I was forced to take pictures of my drawings.
Because of this they might be of minor quality, I hope I'll be able to fix that soon.

(click to view) Zeno Hiraken Hollowying:

I said this in the cbox, but I don't think you saw, so...

1. The torso area seems a bit disproportionate.
2. Not sure what's going on in the head area but it's mostly obscuring the face, so I can't comment on that...
3. Realistically, cloth doesn't move like that.

I'd say my biggest problem here is that it's in pencil. No matter how clean a sketch is, I can't stand it if it's not inked. But that's just one of my personal pet peeves.

1. Torso might be a bit too thin and too small indeed.
2. He's hollowfying, meaning he's creating his Hollow Mask. So yes his face is barely visible, though his right eye is completely visible. Since it's a Hollow eye and a bit evil, it adds something mysterious to the character. But I admit, since it's only a sketch, it doesn't show too good.
3. You might be right on that one lol. The clothes look kinda weird around the arms...

It's just a sketch, I usually ink. Though only in black, I rarely color my sketches.

Thanks for your comment. ^^

No worries. To be honest, I couldn't really get a good look at it and make better comments because it's in pencil. My OCD decides to punch me in the boob at the most random things.

Upcoming Espada character's Resurrección:

Spoiler:

Or if you would prefer a link: https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img825/5691/fuerzaresurreccin2.png

I drew this in Photoshop using a mouse, that's why the detail can be a bit off.
( Like the muscles, etc... ) But I wanted to color it and as I staid before,
my scanner doesn't work properly and apparantly I'm too poor to buy a new one.
Let me know what you think. ^^

I decided to make a different Resurrección and draw it out with a pencil this time.
Didn't color it though, but personally I think it worked out pretty well.

Here's the link: https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/f/img11.png/

Zaren Azric ( aka Naraga Zenos ) was looking for a suitable picture of his Resurrección.
So I decided to help him out and offered him to make a drawing of it.
Based on his descriptions and pictures he showed me, I drew this:
https://2img.net/r/ihimg/photo/my-images/51/zarenazric.png/

Scanned it this time and it might be a bit large.
If you want a resized version you can always ask me.

So yeah just wanted to share this with you. I take requests as well.
And eh... This is the part where I usually say "Let me know what you think"
but that doesn't really seem to work on this site for some reason...