Raiki
Posts : 2 Points : 0 Join date : 2010-11-05
| Subject: Enoki sample 11/5/2010, 7:43 pm | |
| In this office with piles of paper work, the sun creeping thou the window’s showing that it was dusk, the books laid about around messy like but strangle organized itself, and in the chair with the sun rays hitting his face. His eyes slowly opened to the room his hair in front of his face bags under his eyes, the first thing he noticed was a cup of coffee and he picked up the cup with his left hand, taking a small sip, quickly followed by him spiting it out, it was ice cold and already ruined cup of coffee. He took a moment and stood up still carrying the cup in his hands, he placed his head quickly to one side popping it with a good cracking sound. As he went to his door. Walking over the messy laid out books till he did so never knocking one over.
As he used his right hand to open the door sliding it open and he saw the sun filled halls. must have been early morning, he figured as he took a few steps till he found himself outside. Basking in the golden rays of the sun his blue hair shined a bit as he yawned and dumped the cold coffee into a nearby bush. His eyes closed as he turned his head and started walking almost like a zombie before opening them again his faint blue eyes prefect in the sun it seemed. Young and strong looking filled with hopes these eyes are, as he stepped into a building many people said hello captain to him and he said hello back as he made way to a kitchen like area and fixed a quick spot of hot coffee. Its smell filled the area, as he poured some into the cup and taking a good sip he relaxed into a nearby chair he smiled as some of his squad members came in as well to do the same. They chatted for a bit and had a good laugh. Ah the time seemed to be flying by as it been a good 2 hours. As he stood he said goodbye to his squad members walking back to his office still holding the now empty cup.
At long last he was back in his chair and began reading the reports of everyone and thinking of actions that can be, he took all the ones he had read so far about improving some guarding around shops into consideration. It seemed some people where trying to steal lately in the past few days. He sat there thinking deeply about this. Enoki himself had been thou the ropes and knew how deadly stealing can get. So he started to write the files to send some of his men to guard these shops so that way. Afterwards he laid back and tried to drink some good relaxing coffee only finding the cup was empty. | |
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Zafaron Uriuc Admin
Posts : 388 Points : 65 Join date : 2010-09-19 Age : 32 Location : California Dude!
| Subject: Re: Enoki sample 12/13/2010, 8:56 pm | |
| Well since ya never updated it, I will finally give it a
TIER 3
Primarily because of a lot of grammar mistakes and things of that nature. | |
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