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PostSubject: Yuki Nanjo (Approved)   Yuki Nanjo (Approved) Icon_minitime5/7/2011, 7:04 am

Name:Yuki Nanjo

Age: 18

Years Since Gaining Superhuman Powers:4

Gender:Male

Current Location: Japan

Occupation: Club Fighter

Rank: General

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Personality: Yuki is a usually calm person with seemingly impossible dreams. He is a big thinker and very smart and strong for his age. While his dreams seem impossible, he has an incredibly thick skull and an unbreakable determination which would make anyone think that his dream isn't such a big leap. He is very mysterious but not as quiet as one would think. He usually appears uncaring but he hates when people catch glimpses of his softer side. It seems impossible for negative emotions(with the exception of hate and anger) to effect him, let alone consume him. He always remain calm even in the most pressuring of situations.

While being calm and collected and even seemingly peaceful, Yuki is very mean to others. He can be described as a bully though he doesn't necessarily fit that description. He likes to pick fight with only those who seem worthy of fighting him or those delinquents that he normally sees on a daily basis. He enjoys using his so far unrivaled skills to bring those bullies down to size. While he's not a physical bully though, he is a mental bully to the weak or to those younger than him. He likes to pick on them and play on their emotions and take things from them. He also likes to kick them around. But, those few people that he actually likes seems to see this as a form of affection.

Yuki has a deep hate for anyone who thinks there are more peaceful methods than fighting. He also hates weak people who think they are stronger than him or people who judge based on appearance. The only thing that really annoys him is the sound of a baby crying. Though he is mean and suppresses his lighter emotions, he is quite at peace with himself on the inside. He is open to liking things but just doesn't show it as much as would be normal. The only thing he really and truly loves is candy. He enjoys the sweet taste but hates bitter candy. Aside from that, he has a lust for blood which to people who doesn't really know him would seem like something he loves.

Fighting Style: Since he was a child, Yuki had spent his years training in martial arts. He learned several different styles of martial arts and uses them to keep his moves from being read and/or to confuse his opponents. While he is quick, he is also powerful and uses this in combination with his techniques to overwhelm those that are opposing him at the time.

Background: When growing up, Yuki didn't have much of a family. His mother died while giving birth to him. And when he was about five years old, his father drank himself to death. He was just a child so he obviously couldn't take the responsibility of paying rent at the time. He was forced out and had to survive on the streets all alone. He wasn't necessarily forced on to the street, he just refused to be taken in because he was embarrassed about his father and scared he might be put in an even worse condition. While on the streets, he was picked on by arrogant adults and he was picked on by want-to-be thugs. Every night he cried himself to sleep in some random alley. He had to steal food just to eat every few nights. He was in so much despair. His world was completely obscured in darkness.

One day, he was out stealing food for his stomach could no longer take the pain. He snatched some bread off of a shelf and ran out of the store. The owner chased after him leaving his assistant in charge. Soon, Yuki's feet gave out as the hunger consumed him. He tripped and fell on the floor. The store owner finally caught up to him and cornered him. The owner slowly approached Yuki and had a malicious smile. Yuki knew something bad was going to happen but just as he lost all hope, a stray cat that Yuki had saw numerous times walked up out of no where. It jumped up on the store owners face and began scratching viciously. The man screamed in horror as the cat scratched his face. Eventually the man reached into his pocket and stabbed pulled out a blade. He stabbed the cat.

Yuki's eyes widened in horror as the cat dropped. He dropped the loaf of bread as tears began to stream down his face. He crawled over to the cat and kept his head down. He knew he was next. The man lifted the knife high above his head and swung it down. Just as Yuki thought he was going to die, a loud crash almost deafened him. He looked up to see a man dressed in only dark colors standing over him. He looked behind him and saw the store keepers face scraping down the side of a brick wall. When he hit the ground, his face was bloodied. a brick wall. The savior of the young boy took him in to live under his house. The man had soon revealed to Yuki that the only reason he took him in is because he was once like Yuki and had he not found him stealing bread, he might have left him.

For years after that incident, the man had trained Yuki in martial arts. He taught him Karate. As years progressed, Yuki came close to mastering Karate but he had developed a love for fighting. He confessed to his master that he had wanted to learn more than just Karate. His master took that better than Yuki had first expected. He sent the young boy to a friend. That friend taught him Muay thai for a while. Yuki was naturally a quick learner. He was picked up things easily and he never gave up. After a while of learning Muay Thai, Yuki wasn't necessarily satisfied. Once again, he was sent to another master.

This master would teach him chinese martial arts. After nine years of hard and successive training, Yuki had learned several different martial arts. He tried to get all of his teachers to help him learn more, but they knew no one else. With this, he left them grateful and began his life on his own. He started fighting at clubs to get money and he purchased an apartment. He also enrolled himself in school so he can try to live a life as normal as possible. Or at least more normal than what he was used to. For the next three years, Yuki spent his life training himself learning even more than what his master taught him, and studying.

During the three year period that he had trained himself, something began going wrong with him. He felt a power within him but it seemed to harm him more than anything. He got minor injuries and wounds until one day while training, he learned to activate his power. He was shocked, and a little bit scared. It wasn't that it was scary, it was just weird to him. After witnessing it, he left his training alone for his week. But then he began thinking how it couldn't hurt to improve himself a bit more. Soon after, he returned to his private training ground and began training to use his newfound power. Or at least endure it until he was done fighting.

When he felt that his power was at it's peak, he decided training was no longer necessary. He went to his favorite club and decided to fight, this time not for money, but just to test his power out. He found that fighting gave him even more strength then he had when he started and with this, he became satisfied. Though he had half beat a man to death, he discovered a new power for himself.

But, little did he know, at the fight club he was at, there was someone watching him. That person wasn't hiding either. About two days after the fight, he revealed himself to Yuki and introduced himself, as well as informed Yuki about the organization. He was just a regular person but soon he brought Yuki to a general and that general brought Yuki into the organization, where he worked his way to be a general as he is today.


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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Nanjo (Approved)   Yuki Nanjo (Approved) Icon_minitime5/7/2011, 3:16 pm

Not really going to ask for too many changes on this.

First just a question, doesn't really require a change since it would require a change in everything. Why is he just thrown on the streets and not sent to an orphanage. I tend to see this a lot where orphans are just left to fend for themselves but most governments have a way to prevent this from happening. Just curious if you thought about it.

Would like a bit more about this mysterious man who saves him and becomes his martial arts master. I mean...why does he do this? It just seems to happen with no explanation and I would like at least some understanding of why it occurs.

Also brick beats skull. So if he actually made the other man's head DENT the brick, that means that he killed the shopkeeper because his head would not survive that impact. Are you...aware of that?


Final thing is that you didn't mention when he joins the Superhuman Org and became one of the generals. All of the Superhumans, unless they are a Maverick and thus part of a completely different organization, are part of the Superhuman Org and have been scouted by a Superhuman General at some point.It wouldn't take long after his power awoke that he would have been found and brought into the org so that needs to be added.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Nanjo (Approved)   Yuki Nanjo (Approved) Icon_minitime5/7/2011, 6:17 pm

I kinda rushed and fixed. Thanks for giving me a fast reply.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Nanjo (Approved)   Yuki Nanjo (Approved) Icon_minitime5/7/2011, 9:48 pm

Everything seems good to go.

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and I'm trying for faster replies since college has prevented me from doing them for a bit. Having a profile with only a few errors also helps.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Nanjo (Approved)   Yuki Nanjo (Approved) Icon_minitime5/9/2011, 3:25 pm

One small thing, we have a policy of keeping human characters at the age of minimum 18. Just edit that little detail and you're good to go.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki Nanjo (Approved)   Yuki Nanjo (Approved) Icon_minitime5/9/2011, 6:41 pm

Edited.
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