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PostSubject: Yuki's Ability   Yuki's Ability Icon_minitime5/7/2011, 10:57 pm

Name:Celestial Body

Appearance: The body is slight buffed and at first a faint light surrounds the user. But, as time progresses, the user is outlined more and more until the faint light becomes jet black and flurries around them like a control flame.

Ability: While this ability is active, the user gains incredible speed as well as immense strength. Their defense is also raised slightly since they are outlined by their own reiatsu. Their layer of reiatsu on the outside of their body also protects against outside influences to an extent.

Techniques:
1:The user forms a black orb(much like the reiatsu surrounding his body) in the palm of his hand(s) and this attack can be used either as a projectile or melee attack. The ball is actually an explosive that explodes upon impact with whatever it actually hits. The explosion covers about 50 feet and it has a 10 post cool down.:

2:The user can overload his hands or feet with reiatsu until it is leaking out and when he is ready, he can attack with the built up energy to release a devastating blow. If delivered in the right place at the correct time, the attack can be critical to both sides, meaning that the user is also injured, though by much less.. This attack has a five post cool down and a one post charge.:

3:The user can manipulate the shape of the aura or transfer the entire aura to one part of the body to make something that would be of use. For example, the user might create wings for him to fly for a bit when he needs it. Or he might create a shield to absorb damage on certain part of his body where he really needs it. He cannot create anything else and unless destroyed, the aura lasts for three posts. The cooldown is 2 posts.:


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PostSubject: Re: Yuki's Ability   Yuki's Ability Icon_minitime5/12/2011, 12:38 am

First things first.

Your third tech cannot just last until the user is out of reiatsu. That would be a passive, not a tech. And you already have a passive ability with gaining strength, speed, and defense. Can't have more then that. So you need a duration and cooldown for the third tech.

Just want to make it clear that your black orb tech will damage the user as well if they use it as a melee attack.

Your second tech needs a needs at least a one turn charge. Also I am confused as to why it is "critical" for both sides. Does it do a bunch of damage to Yuki as well?
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PostSubject: Re: Yuki's Ability   Yuki's Ability Icon_minitime5/13/2011, 7:11 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yuki's Ability   Yuki's Ability Icon_minitime5/13/2011, 7:59 pm

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