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PostSubject: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime12/5/2010, 5:21 pm

Name: Kusano Gashira

Age: 350

Visual Age: 25

Years since Entrance into the Gotei 13: 290

Gender: male

Division: 11

Rank: Captain

Appearance: http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/038/b/f/Commission___Kanzaki_by_Geofffffff.jpg

Personality: Kusano has a rather cold and emotionless personality. Ever since his former Captain died a 115 years ago. He was the 3rd seat back then and Captain Zeno Hiraken was one of his best friends. After Zeno's death Kusano became a calm and indifferent person. All he really cares about is the destruction of his enemies. As his former captain was, he is a perfectionist. Doing what he needs to do perfectly, nothing less, nothing more. He trusts his subordinates to do the same. They should be able to take care of themselves. So he spends a lot of time training them and getting to know their strengths and weaknesses. Then he can help them improve themselves and become better and better.
He thinks he shouldn't always have his subordinates' backs. He's clever and thinks things through, just as Zeno has taught him to.

Fighting Style: He's a fighting specialist. He's fast, strong and can endure a lot. He's as good in close combat as he is ranged. Kusano is a good improviser, though he prefers to fight with certain tricks and tactics to trap his enemies so he can deal maximum damage.

Background:

Human

Kusano was born on October 10th 1660, in a rather poor family. He lived in a small village in Japan, near Sapporo. As he grew up he had to work a lot so he could buy food for his family. He had two sisters and a mother, since his father had died two months before his birth. His mother never talked about his father, as if she was ashamed for him. After a few years Kusano stopped about him. A month and a half after he had become 12, his oldest sister died. She had been a whore in order to earn money, but a drunken costumer killed her when she asked for money. Kusano had enough of that miserable life of his and left his home. He went into the mountains in order to find a new life, it couldn't be much worse than his old life.
He passed out somewhere in the mountains because he didn't have anything to drink or eat for two days. Luckily for him, a monk found him.
The monk lived in a monastery in the mountains.
The monks there were peaceful martial artists. They tested the boy and found that Kusano was very gifted. They found Kusano a gift from the heavens.
So they educated him and taught him martial arts.

When he became 25 years old he became very ill.
After a month or two he could no longer move or feel his legs.
After three months he was completely paralyzed and a month later he died.

Before Konso.

He opened his eyes and he found himself close to the monastery. He returned to the monastery but when he saw his friends and went over to talk to them he realized nobody could see or hear him. He then noticed a strange chain was attached to his chest, though it was corroding. A mysterious man appeared next to him as he was trying to pull out the chain. The man was clothed in a black kimono and carried a sword. Before he could ask anything the man explained who and what he was. A Soul Reaper to send him to the afterlife.
Though the man quickly added that his Chain of Fate was almost gone and that he had to perform Konso before he became some sort of monster.
Kusano didn't ask any questions, he only nodded and let the Shinigami do what he had to do.


In Rukongai.

He lived in Rukongai for a few months like all the others did. Though it started remembering him to his former, poor life. He didn't like it one bit.
So once again he left his 'family', without even saying goodbye, and entered the Academy.


In Seireitei.

He was already a very good fighter when he entered the Academy and after 10 years he was already allowed to enter the Gotei 13. He didn't even have Shikai yet.
He became 7th seat of the 11th Division. He thought about trying to join the 2nd Division, but he was so obsessed with fighting. So he joined the 11th Division because it shared his way of thinking. After 24 years of extremely intensive training he mastered Shikai. His Shikai was overwhelming and he challenged the Lieutenant for a fight. If he won, he would become the new second seat. He won easily and became the lieutenant of the 11th under Zafaron Uriuc, a man who he practically worshiped. Years passed and a new guy became third seat. It was Zeno Hiraken. The man was a lot older than him, though Kusano was stronger. They fought countless times and became very good friends.
Though his Captain, liked Zeno better than he liked Kusano. Proof of this was that one day his Captain decided to train Zeno so he could achieve Bankai. Kusano was ordered to bring Zeno food four times a day as Zeno trained. Kusano was extremely jealous and started training harder and harder, though he didn't succeed in manifesting his Zanpakutõ out of his body.
When Zeno finally achieved Bankai, Kusano hoped he was still able to defeat Zeno. Since he had fully mastered Shikai, and his Shikai was stronger than Zeno's.
Unfortunately, this was not the case. Zeno had challenged him to a fight to test his bankai but Kusano had lost after only a few minutes. He even had to recover in the hospital for a few days. Fully recovered, he asked Zeno to help him achieve Bankai.
Zeno was now the new lieutenant, because Zafaron was still stronger than him.
Using the same methods as his Captain, Zeno helped Kusano manifest his Zanpakutõ out of his body. And eventually after quite some time, Kusano achieved Bankai.

When he went back to Seireitei to show Zeno his new amazing powers he learned that his friend had died in a fight with a Vasto Lorde.
It felt as if his world collapsed. His best friend and lieutenant was no more.
He replaced his best friend and ran around like a frustrated, depressed and fighting obsessed fool. Eventually, his Captain became the Sotaicho and had to be replaced.
It was but logical that Kusano would follow up Zafaron.
He became the new Captain of the 11th Division and it was as if Zeno had never existed at all.
Kusano never talked about him again and forbade his subordinates to even mention Zeno.


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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime12/6/2010, 7:28 pm

I think you need look up the definition of minimalist. I think you are confused. It means just doing the essentials. Nothing else. Only the bare necessities. You wouldn't be spending tons of time triaining your squad if you were a minimalist. And you wouldn't be doing perfectly if you are a minimalist. That would be a perfectionist. They aren't friends.

Is there any downside to your fighting abilities. You seem to be good at everything.

Moving on to backstory.
I don't think you have very strong grasp about the concept of ninjas but enough so i will let it pass. (Emerald Tiger. *facepalm*)

Spanish trading ships did not go to Osaka during the period of ISOLATION. They had no contact with the outside world until the 1800s when Perry drove a freaking battleship into their harbor. Please change it to something other than a spanish trading ship please.

The shinigami backstory is quite odd. But I guess it doesn't actually break the site's plot or do something impossible. And it seems reasonable considering the way 11th division is.

So I guess you just need to change the other stuff above for approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime12/7/2010, 11:56 am

*sigh, I was tired.
Though I had a false idea of what a minimalist was.

Downside: Kusano is no good at Kido, he's just a very good melee fighter with a melee/ranged Zanpakutõ.

I know what ninjas are and how to put 'em in a good context as I've proven before but once again, I was really tired and just wanted to get this done...
So yeah... Emerald Tiger Ninja Clan!!!

Didn't look up what was happening in Osaka during the 17th Century.

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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime12/9/2010, 4:33 pm

One small thing: you've still got Kusano described as a minimalist, even though you say he trains a lot and does things perfectly. A minimalist would do as little as needed, and in general also to the point of the work being barely acceptable, so that's actually quite a contradiction.

Other than that, the changes made seem to work properly.

Also: GENESIC... EMERALD... TAGER... BUSTER!!

I really needed to get that off my chest.
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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime12/9/2010, 5:27 pm

Haha, well I hope you feel better now. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime12/9/2010, 5:44 pm

One small detail, there's no word between "Kusano never" and "about him again". though I can guess it's either supposed to be talked or thought.

With the edits done, I think this is ready to be APPROVED. Of course, if any other member of the Staff has valid reasoning, they may revoke my decision.
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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime12/10/2010, 7:32 am

Yup I forgot to put 'talked' in there. Fixed it.


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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime3/14/2011, 12:03 am

Okay, a couple of things I've noticed here in retrospect, after being asked to re-read this by Kuro.

I see a lot of things that are either off, or just need changes. I will go over them, but first I must say that this is not an un-approval, as it's nothing related to anything you've done in the plot so far, and I feel it's only fair I go over it now, since I was the one who somehow overlooked it at the time.

I take full responsibility for overlooking this back when I approved it. I won't say anything in my defense, and if you feel this should've been brought up at the time, I am sorry.

I won't say anything about the whole "misery above all else" theme before he runs into the mountains. However, I don't see why he decides to run into the mountains, and not just for instance live on the streets.

The monks deciding to teach him martial arts doesn't seem quite right, since at that time in history, such secrets would be restricted to those either brought to the monastary as infants, or had stayed for a very long time along with proving to be trustworthy with such skills. And in many cases, where it was actually a secret (unlike Shaolin), there were chosen as few practitioners as possible, and not uncommonly only one or two successors.

You should also change or rephrase the part about "completely paralyzed", because if he was COMPLETELY paralyzed, he wouldn't be able to eat or anything, thus would last less than a week or so at most before dying.

He accepts the fact that he can move again once he dies and becomes a spirit much too fast. The first thing he should've done would be going "WHAT THE FUCK?! How the hell am I even moving again, after 3 or 4 god damned months?!" or something as to that effect.

Calling the Shikai "overwhelming" in power... well, each Shikai has it's own strengths and weaknesses, but directly calling it overwhelming... at most Kusano himself would think of it as such, but it wouldn't actually be overwhelming compared to many other Shikai.

I will say that it should've taken more time than a week to obtain Bankai after just recently learning how to manifest the spirit. I'd personally think a few years without help (as seems to be the case), but Zaf is the Shinigami-man, so I'll check with him first.
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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime3/14/2011, 1:27 pm

[posted with the wrong account sorry, this can be deleted]


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PostSubject: Re: Kusano Gashira (Approved)   Kusano Gashira  (Approved) Icon_minitime3/14/2011, 6:11 pm

Haha, okay. ^^'
I'll go over the background again,
I think there's some other stuff in it that's off too.
I won't change things drastically, I'll just add some more detail here and there
and make things more realistic.
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