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PostSubject: Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved)   Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved) Icon_minitime11/7/2010, 2:23 am

Name: Kontan Assaiki (Soul Crusher)

Hollow Mask Appearance:
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Unique Ability: Increases Naraga's strength to the point where a punch to the chest will knock the wind out of an opponent and send him back a few feet.

Unique Techinque: Black Oblivion Cero- The Black Oblivion Cero is a pitch black orb of reiastu with rays of white light that shine through the blackness that Naraga fires from his mouth. It is special enhanced cero made by Naraga and his much stronger than the average crimson cero that menos can fire.

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Duration- Instant
Cooldown- 3 Posts


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PostSubject: Re: Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved)   Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved) Icon_minitime11/7/2010, 8:45 pm

Weaken the technique. Even with the charge time, I feel it's too strong, and definitely too long. I won't say anything more on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved)   Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved) Icon_minitime11/8/2010, 8:22 pm

Making shadows physical is too much for a mask alone. Making it so you could make yourself invisible I guess could work but I am still meh about it. Does it make your reishi vanish as well of just bring you out of sight?

Also void of pain just needs to be scrapped. Considering I don't like the shadow manipulation anyways and then orb of darness thing makes it too strange.

Major changes needed, sorry.
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PostSubject: Re: Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved)   Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved) Icon_minitime11/9/2010, 12:21 am

Finally

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PostSubject: Re: Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved)   Kontan Assaiki (Naraga's Mask) (Approved) Icon_minitime6/4/2011, 6:26 pm

Edited and finished (Finally)
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