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PostSubject: Crystal Aravault (Approved)   Crystal Aravault  (Approved) Icon_minitime10/18/2010, 11:23 pm

Name: Crystal Aravault

Age: 200

Visual Age: 25

Gender: Female

Rank: Espada

Appearance: Crystal stands in at about 5'7, and looks to weigh 118 lbs. She has, dark blue hair, deep purple eyes, and pale skin. Her Espada tattoo is located in the "tramp stamp" or lower back area of her body, and she has two armbands which go up to her elbows, as a result of her mask breaking off.

For her attire, Crystal wears a short sleeved, promiscious variation of the usual Espada uniform. For starters, she has it cut to expose her hips, and show off a major amount of cleavage. She does wear a black bikini underneath of the outfit, but it still doesn't do much, and only leaves so much more to the imagination. She also wears a pair of rose colored sunglasses, and a pink scarf around her neck, which sometimes covers her mouth.

Personality: Crystal comes off as an ice queen, and while she dresses warmly, she is a harsh person, with a tongue as sharp as a newly forged blade. She often uses it against her fellow Espada, or the Fraccion below her, should they fail her in any way. This harshness stems from the pride and joy of being such a high rank going to her head. She loves nothing more than power, and is almost always searching for a new way to surpass her superiors. Sometimes, this includeds being a bit of a tease, but nothing too far beyond that.

Fighting Style: Likes to use deception to weaken the opponent, and go in for the killing blow herself. In the meantime, she's prone to using various techniques and trying to freeze her opponent in her tracks. While in her Ress form, she'll take a more head on approach, but if the fight is looking not in her favor, she'll switch back to using trickery to gain the upper hand.

Background: Crystal was raised in Paris, France, on the farm of her grandfather. She never knew he father, seeing as how he wanted nothing to do with her, because she was conceived out of wedlock. She grew up normally, but once she hit her 20's, she ran into the problem of farming not paying the bills.

To make money on the side, she would entice men for various favors, and always demanded to be paid in advance. The people paying her never seemed to mind, and she would always take off with the money before things got too serious, using a new alias each time as to not get tracked down as easily. However, one of the men she solicited a favor to found her, and when she had already spent the money, shot her on sight, and was found dead two days later.

After that, her soul became bound to her grandfather's farm, and eventually, she became a Hollow, and began to consume the souls of men and women alike. Soon, she found that human souls no longer satisfied her appetite. She quickly learned that only other hollows could do this for her now. Soon after, she began to roam far and wide in search of other hollows, and became a Gillian. After this stage, she began to consume other gillians on a massive scale, and reached Adjuchdas.

This constant devouring of hollows helped her find her way to Pereza, and it was he who taught her how to tear off the mask. As a result, she regained a someone human form. After this, she joined up with the Arrancar, and through the use of her assests, and a show of her power time and again, she became the Tercera Espada. After achieving the rank, she began relax and let the Fraccion under her do the most of her dirty work.

During the events of the Espada/Shinigami war, Crystal took a backseat to the action, and let her fellow Arrancar take the brunt of the attack. When the time came, she eagerly jumped into battle, hoping to claim the lives of as many Shinigami as possible.


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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Aravault (Approved)   Crystal Aravault  (Approved) Icon_minitime10/24/2010, 5:40 am

Main issues I see.

Gillians are a form of Menos. Gilians and Adjucas are both Menos level hollows that are formed when hollows eat other hollows. So she didn't become a menos hollow by eating so many men and women souls. Just say that the behavior continued until her hunger could only be satisfied by other people.

Just change that and it is completely

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