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    PostSubject: Kuraiyami Hana- Finished   Kuraiyami Hana- Finished Icon_minitime10/29/2010, 4:52 pm

    Name: Kuraiyami Hana

    Age: 200+

    Visual Age: 19

    Gender: Female

    Rank: Rangeing on which espada are open, if none, regular.

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    Personality: Kuraiyami is usually quiet arrancar that hates fights, but loves reading. If she was to see a friend hurt or killed, she would lose controll of her self & attack the killer without any thought added to it. Sometimes when she meets a truely stupid person, she likes to screw with them abit untill she gets truely bored with him/her. She also gets bored very easly when not doing anything & often makes smart comments back to a person who would be being rude to her. She usually perferrs to be left alone when thinking deeply about certain things & usually plays a flute that she would mold from her rose pedals to eather calm her mind about the thoughts, or get the thoughts clearly out of her mind. She is usually a glass half full kind of person when she opens up to somebody & offers to help in any time she can help.

    Fighting Style: Kurai usually focus on tatic, her strenth is limited but her Relatsu & speed is very great.

    Background: Kuraiyami Hana used to be a young human girl like everybody else in her town with what she thought was a great family; but secretly hid things from behind her & treated all of her broths & sisters better than her. Though Kurai did not see it at the time, the obviously did not care. She was only 17 walking home late from her high school after helping the teacher organize their school work. It was then when she was faced by a hollow. She ran the oppisite way from it as fast as she could & even threw her book bag at it to get it away from her, no matter what, it was still faster.

    Tears ran down her cheeks as she screamed for her mother & father countless times hoping that they would hear her. She kept running untill she tripped over a sidewalk ledge & cut her ankle largely then turning around to the creature. She began screming loudly seeing it but still not heared as it dovoured her soul quickly. After that she woke in a sandy area abit confused. She stood up noticeing how hungry she was all of a sudden & looked around the area seeing afew creatures walking around. Her body told her for some reason to eat them, so she did.

    Afterwards she began walking around the sandy area wondering if she could ever go back home, but she knew she was dead, so she probally couldn't. She continued walking untill she saw one of those creatures in front of a black hole. She silently walked behind it & looked from becide it & into the hole seeing the liveing world. Not able to controll herself she jumped in front of the creature excited & through the hole into the liveing world. She jumped into a forest now wanting to go home, but for some reason at the same time she did not want to.

    She continued to walk aimlessly in the liveing world's forest untill she decided to go to her home. When she did, she saw many people there laughing & drinking red wine. Her parents were laughing loudly cracking jokes about why she did not die any sooner. Shortly after this she reconized that everyone was here for her wake. The only person she could hear crying was her school freind, Kazuma, crying because every day her & Kazuma would fight at school, & no matter how many time Kurai beat him, he would allways come back for more. Heck, she even had a scedule for him.

    "Why did you leave you little punk?!" He screamed over her coffin as 3 of his freinds were holding him back. The coffin was wide open showing her lifeless body laying there wereing a long black dress & afew ribbons in her hair. Her skin was as pale as plain paper. Kurai could not belive what she was seeing. Who she thought was her enemy.. was crying.. for her. "Your just afraid of loosing hu?!" he continued screaming, "Come on Kazuma... She's gone.." one of his freinds told him abit saddened "No!" He screamed still pulling forward trying to get to her coffin.

    "No! I won't let her go!" He sceamed as she swung a fist at a picture of her in the middle of beautiful flowers & roses & right above her coffin as his fist stopped "Your.. Your supposed to be here for me.. allways.." he cryed as tears beging to stream from his cheeks & onto his balled up fist. "Come on Kazuma.." one of his freind said softly beging to pull him away & out of the house "Nooooo!!!" He screamed still sobbing as they dragged him from the area "Sorry.. for the interuption.." Another of his freinds said continueing to drag him from her home.

    'Kazuma...' Kurai thought in her head still hearing his heart broken sobbs in the distance & laughing at her wake. Noticeing she was looking to the ground she quickly looked up to see someone plungeing a dagger into the picture ofher right above her coffin. That person was her father. The broken glass fell into her coffin as her father laughed loudly followed by her mother's laugh. Kurai growled softly hearing this knowing now that they could not see her, but she was going to kill them. Every one there that laughed at her cold corpse, she was going to kill.

    She waited untill nightfall when all of the lights were turned off in the town then began killing the ones she remembered that were laughing at her wake one by one with abilities that she had never knew about untill now. Her parents first, then her siblings, then the others. Afterwards she came to Kazuma's home looking through the window noticeing that the blinds were not shut. She saw Kazuma laying in his bed wereing a white tank top & striped Green & blue boxers shakeing rapidly with tears rolling down his cheeks. She knew she could not talk to him, & never could. She was dead. & nothing could change that.

    She sighed gently beging to walk away from his house & back into the forest were she came from. She wondered if she could go back to that sandy area again, for some reason eating those creatures made her abit stronger, & she wanted more of it. She tryed to remember how she saw the other creature make the black hole & wondered if she would do the same thing that she could go back to that sandy area. She sighed gently consentrateing on one area in front of her & noticed a identical black hole opening up from where she was consentrateing get bigger & bigger. After it was done growing she walked through it & back to the area where she first appeared at.

    As she was there she ate more & more of the creatures & every time feeling stronger. She liked the feeling, alot. She continued to do this untill one day a man walked up to her & offered her to become stronger, if she could only be his slave. She hated the idea, but liked the strength. At this time she was not even thinking about Kazuma, so she said yes. After that he reached forward to her face & ripped off most of the mask snickering softly. She screamed in pain feeling this thinking like he was ripping the skin from her face, when he wasn't. She lay there in the sand then wimpering in pain as the man walked away from her & soon dissapearing.

    Not knowing what happened after that Kurai woke up in the sand & began to stand up still feeling pain in her face & remembering Kazuma as she touched her cheek. She remembered his heartbrake sobbs crying out for her, she remembered her family laughing at her death, she remembered killing them & seeing Kazuma shake rapidly scared in his bed. She remembered everything that happened to her from in her past as a human. & hoped that someday she would see Kazuma again.

    Ever sence then she continued walking around Hueco Mundo wanting to go back, but at the same time, not wanting to. Her power increased much over the time she was there, but she was still never able to control her abilities. She never fought unless she was to protect herself or anyone else dear to her. But she was never able to smile unless someone got her to. Kazuma was allways on her thoughts, & there was no second where he wasn't.


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    PostSubject: Re: Kuraiyami Hana- Finished   Kuraiyami Hana- Finished Icon_minitime10/29/2010, 6:05 pm

    Check the rules. An RP sample is required before your character app will be looked at. Reading ze rules is important in all areas so don't forget it.
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    PostSubject: Re: Kuraiyami Hana- Finished   Kuraiyami Hana- Finished Icon_minitime10/29/2010, 6:35 pm

    A few other things to note: We don't use any canon characters in this RP. It's basically an entirely different universe, meaning no Ichigo, no Aizen and most certainly no Urahara. He never existed.

    All Vizard have at one point in time been members of the Gotei 13, whether they were Captains, Lieutenants or regulars. Also, the person who gave them the chance to become a Vizard is the mysterious "Vizard Maker", who is an NPC that Zafaron usually takes any action for if needed in the RP, though that is generally very rare. Also, Soul Society do not know he exists. Until the war 2 years ago (in the RP) only the Captain-Commander even knew about the existance of Vizards, and with no knowledge of them even still existing, and having no info about the Vizard Maker at all.

    Also, as stated in the character template for Shinigami, Arrancar and Vizards, they will look 18 years old once they hit 100 years of age, and gain one year in physical appearance every 10-20 years or so. And no character looking less than 18 years old will be accepted, unless you can somehow manage to convince most of the staff - including the admins - to let you look younger.

    Finally, the RP sample is the first thing we ask for here, before you submit your applications for character and powers. They belong in the Roleplay Samples section, located right above the Character Creation section. Based on the sample you post there, you will be given a Tier (from 1-4) which will determine what characters you can make, and at what rank.
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    PostSubject: Re: Kuraiyami Hana- Finished   Kuraiyami Hana- Finished Icon_minitime11/8/2010, 8:08 pm

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    Where do I put the Rp sample Zafaron is talking about? I'm confused?
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