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Mannosuke

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PostSubject: Mannosuke's Doujinshi   Mannosuke's Doujinshi Icon_minitime1/26/2011, 11:43 pm

Doujinshi Name: One MAN, 100 Women

Release Phrase: ‘SO I HEARD YOU LIKE MUDKIPS!?!?!?’

Release Pose: He throws off his shirt into the air as he slowly moves looks down and pushes his glasses up on his face. Right as he moves his hand away from the glasses his power activates and his muscles swiftly expand.

Fandom: Touhou

Appearance: When transforming into his otaku form almost always has to start by undressing down to a basic funadoshi for fear of tearing his clothes into pieces. As he transforms his entire musculature bulges out immensely making him look like a champion athlete though not to the point of looking like steroid abuse. While the main changes take place in his upper body,primarily his chest and biceps, his legs also grow wider and far more muscular. Even his face changes gaining a much more clearly defined jawline and chin. However the changes are still primarily focused in his body's shape, as his hair and eye color do not change color in the Otaku form. Once the transformation is completed he used to just remain in the small red funadoshi because he enjoys flaunting his body. However after being arrested twice for public indecency he decided to start wearing a dark blue Chinese to still show off his physique without having to be stopped by the police.

Abilities: He can fire different projectiles from various parts of his body at high volume but low power. These projectiles take their forms from the default attacs used in touhou games, small multi-colored orbs. Each of these does very little damage, about the force of a weak punch, and focus on hitting the opponent extremely often. His body as mentioned gains a lot of strength and muscle mass compared to regular humans.

Techniques:

Rainbow Death: When Mannosuke brings his hands near his hips and flexes into a front lat spread he summons large numbers of diamond shaped projectiles of various colors of the rainbow from his abs. Each of these diamonds are about 4 inches long and about 2 inches thick.

The diamonds while sharp and fast, do little damage each. They are primarily used to frustrate the enemy or distract them. However what each diamond lacks in power it makes up for in numbers. Mannosuke can fire about 1000 diamonds over the course of a minute. They can be fired in one of two formations. Either in a large cone shape from the abs that, when the diamonds have flown about 20 feet, has a radius of about 15 feet. (Keep in mind its not one giant cone of diamonds, they are just fired randomly within that cone shaped area.) The second variation is in a condensed line flying out of his abs. Due to their high concentration this variation does much more damage but is easier to avoid. Only 200 diamonds are fired in the concentrated version.

Charge: 1 Duration: 3 turns of firing Cooldown: 3


Curvy lazors of doomies: Mannosuke flexes his biceps to initate this attack at which point he fires several lasers from his biceps. From his left arm he fires a a stream of lasers that are yellow in color and will spin around Mannosuke once. Not all of the lasers will be on the same plain as they form a sphere of lasers around Mannosuke before firing outward in all directions straightening out slightly as they do so. From his right arm he can fire lasers directly forward in a randomized cone formation.

While the lasers can do piercing damage if a person stands in their way, their main way of injuring the opponent is by slightly slicing and burning if they happen to brush against it. However the lasers don't last long enough to actually cut a limb off or something like that.

Between each batch of lasers being released Mannosuke needs about 10 seconds to cool off before summoning more of them. If he is forced out of his flexing position during this period then he will go into cooldown.

Charge: 1 Duration: 3 batches of lasers (About 30 from his left arm and 10 from his right.) Cooldown: 4

(If you need a better image then go to
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EiJRCFVmMHc
and watch from 3:00-3:43. It is basically this but with slower lasers, less of them and having them be fired in a 3 dimensional plain rather then a two dimensional one. )

Flying Stabby Stabby Death:

Mannosuke summons 30 knives, five at a time though into both his hands and flings them at his opponent. However once during their flight he can stop them and change the direction they are flying in. He cannot stop individual knives, only a specific group of five at a time.

Duration: Until Mannosuke runs out of knives. Cooldown: (Once Mannosuke has run out of knives.) 2
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PostSubject: Re: Mannosuke's Doujinshi   Mannosuke's Doujinshi Icon_minitime2/13/2011, 2:01 am

Alright I think it is finished.

Might be considered to be a tad overpowered due to the volume of attacks but the attacks in general are pretty weak so I think it will work out. Would like someone to check the cooldowns, charge times and stuff.
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Kuketsu Satoshi

Kuketsu Satoshi


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PostSubject: Re: Mannosuke's Doujinshi   Mannosuke's Doujinshi Icon_minitime2/13/2011, 4:23 am

Well, everything seems fine in my opinion. Mannosuke certainly is an interesting character. I also like how he focuses more on quantity than quality which is different to say the least and harder to pull off since each attack has to have the right amount of power or else it will be either too godly or too weak. But I feel like you managed to get it right. So I guess that means that you are....

APPROVED

If anyone sees any issues, do not be afraid to let me know.
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